Reading this makes me hungry, haha. I really enjoyed the flow of it.

cute poem!

it's clever and kinda very pretty.
i like it much.

sneaky. i like it.

I like the mentions of candy! It makes my horrible day better.
interesting format. I like it. it could use some grammatical help, but im not picky.

All the way around, I LOVE!

even if you were just hungry writing this, it's a very well-written poem. the repetition of the "whatever-you-wish" brought it into a circle. i love the end. the rest of the poem sounds so innocent and sweet, but the end gives it a little sinister twist. great job
paz,
-the delirious one