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| woodstock1969 2008-08-17 ch 25,  | abuseAw, that was so cute! Though certain parts of the action sometimes felt a bit rushed, it was well-written and the character development was wonderful. I particularly liked the fact that Jack, although pretty darn near perfect, had flaws - i.e. his alcoholism. It made him more real. I also liked the little religious references you threw in, but that's probably just because I'm a religious person. :-) Anyway, good job! |
| Rachel.Romance. 2008-04-30 ch 25, | abusei really loved this story i will definately read your other stories. :D |
| Carmel March 2008-02-24 ch 25, | abuseLovely job. You've got a serious talent :) I hope to see more stories from you in the future! ~Carm~ |
| Four and Twenty Blackbirds 2008-02-21 ch 25, | abuseThank you, thank you, thank you! It's such a perfect ending! Sorry I couldn't read it until now; I was in New York and all. But it was definitely worth the wait! I can't believe that it's over! But amazing ending. And very cute. I love Jack. :) |
| hanahan 2008-02-21 ch 25, | abuseello! well it's a good ending but it's like something's missing...like whatever happen to A.J.? |
| bookworm-lovingedward 2008-02-19 ch 25, | abuseoh my gosh! that was AMAZING! I was like, SO into it!! and now.. *tear* its over... gah!! there were parts where I just wanted to (And did, once) scream!! the drama! u are like, the MASTER of drama! OMG! well, heh heh... just wanted to say I loved ur story! yippie! |
| SimplySweetnSour 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseoh my. that was such a rant chapter that i couldn't stop myself reading at a rant-speed (hella fast) |
| rieko21 2008-02-19 ch 25, anon. | abuseI can't believe its over!! I am going to cry! Anyway, this chapter was so sweet. It was a good chapter to end on. I can't wait to read whatever else you write in the future. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2008-02-19 ch 25, | abuseAw! That was so cute! I loved it! |
| Katy :) 2008-02-19 ch 25, anon. | abuseWhit without a doubt that was one of the cheesiest, sappiest, fluffiest endings in the history of the world. And I loved it! *does giggling fangirl dance* You=amazing. Don't forget that :D |
| phi 2008-02-19 ch 25, anon. | abuseThat was a super cute ending all warm and fuzzy, wow i really want more to the story but it made my day. It was perfect |
| hanahan 2008-02-17 ch 24, | abuseoh I wish that could happen to me and the guy I like...but eh, it's ok I'm still young, I have to live like a normal 13 year old could should be, hehe. |
| AnimeAngelRiku 2008-02-16 ch 24, | abuseOMG!! I loved it! Totally loved it! |
| bookworm-lovingedward 2008-02-15 ch 14, | abuseaaghh! why the drraammaa!! Its kiilling mme! gahh! *pulls hair out by roots* nno! why does everything go wrong! (btw, me freaking out like this just means you're an amazing author! lol) |
| bookworm-lovingedward 2008-02-15 ch 7, | abuseomgomgomg!! this is realy godd! i'll continue later... like... in the morning when im not so... *yawn* tired... but kepp up!! I cant wait to catch up! but, *tear*, I had such hopes for AJ, to bad... |