yes i do
well sometimes
good job

wow! i love this idea, and you carried it out wonderfully. I love the second stanza, its definately my favorite. Only a couple things to work on. 1) punctuation. technically, its not all one sentance, so you might want to go back and look at that. 2) the third stanza is a little awkward (huh, is that spelled right?). The Prince is obviously the subject of the first two lines, but the sentance actually ends there. So maybe 'he slays the dragon'? or The Prince, he must be dashing... Just a couple suggestions. Happy writing!
michelle

Beautiful Job! I am going to add this to my favorites. I hope to read more of your work.


Best Wishes!


TSP