LOVE the idea, as having thought of this once myself in third grade. Turns out that chocolate donuts and strawberry milk are NOT a good substitute for communion. Anyways, I like the way this is going so far, and, even if this was said early, am pleased to report that the idiot took down YOUR story. Plagiarism's a b-h. Not much to be said for grammar, it's very well written.

Short version: FREAKING AWESOME! KEEP GOING!

Dude, you updated! :)

Brilliant as always!

I've been laughing all through when I'm reading this story. A story of a kid who made his own religion? LOL... That's a very nice idea. I'm not good in critiquing short stories but i think you've establish the characters very well. You described them very well and I also felt the existence of the kid because he seemed to be so real, so complex, so good. But I'm just wondering what happened to the Awesomeist?

Damage Control is an understatement!

Intelligently funny, I would say. And the baked Jesus is an interesting development. Todd seems to be a complex character, and I admire him for his mischevious pervertedness. Keep the flame of sexual innuendo strong in our youth, and our spirits shalt never die!

This was so amusing it almost hurt, I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!

Keep writing and thank you for the update. :)

Hey, good to see you're still writing on this story :)

Just commenting to say I liked the halloween pranks and Mom's threats, they made me laugh a lot.

Keep it up :)

Very short chapter, but it's better than nothing :D I went to that jackass's blog to see if it was true. I don't have an account so no go on the nasty comment, but geez, what a bastard! Crappy crappy prologue that makes it SO obvious that he didn't write the rest of the story, and all that crap about, oh, I decided to post this story I've been writing for like, four years...I am so sorry. I guess there really isn't much you can do, unless you want to go into calling up the site people and being like hey! Copyright infringement! Which would be kind of a hassle. But seriously, that is really shitty of this guy.

But anyway, I hope that we don't have to wait as long for the next chapter! This is one of my favorite stories, so I love it whenever you update!

Sounds ALOT like "The Gospel According to Larry"... just saying...

Hahaha! That was GREAT!

oh I just love it! its hilarious! it fills me with joy! you must keep writing! :)

Yo! ICJ, congrats on the friggin' hilarious story here! I heart ToddJane. PLEASE keep writing. Seriously. -Peace and cookies!

Not me, that's for sure...

:)

Eve

well long time no see but im glad ur bac and writing almost forgot about this story but u updated and i am a very happy person so update soon

Hilarious! I love this story, it's be great to read it more often. Hint hint. Oh, the shameless hint. Well, there's nothing subtle about that, so I guess that makes my hint more of a... Um... Screw that, I can't think of any antonyms.