Yo! ICJ, congrats on the friggin' hilarious story here! I heart Todd+Jane. PLEASE keep writing. Seriously. -Peace and cookies!

Not me, that's for sure...
:)
Eve

well long time no see but im glad ur bac and writing almost forgot about this story but u updated and i am a very happy person so update soon

Hilarious! I love this story, it's be great to read it more often. Hint hint. Oh, the shameless hint. Well, there's nothing subtle about that, so I guess that makes my hint more of a... Um... Screw that, I can't think of any antonyms.

I absolutely love the concept of this story, and I really wish you would continue this. Nice work!
-Peace out

omg i see u havent updated in a while and i'm just letting u know that u must update soon! this story is really awesome!

I think you could combine a few of the chapters, since they're so short, they're all related to Todd introducing his new religion, and they all happen in the same span of time.

I laughed out loud as I read this, which elicited weird looks from my parents since I'm sitting at the kitchen table, but whatever. The only thing I have to point out is that I'm not sure how the first part with the motivational speaking fits into the rest...most of the chapter was about how Todd created his own religion, so the motivational speaking didn't seem to fit. (Though it was funny.)

Hey, just wanted to let you know that I read this story! Unfortunately, I'm not giving you anything else except that because I want to remain completely neutral in this "review" that isn't actually a review proper.

I'm judging Best Humour for the TiRO awards this round, and your story has now been read as part of my duties as the judge. Winners won't be announced until January or whatever, so hang tight.

Oh my Awesome (hehe) this is hands down one of the funniest pieces of writing I've ever read. How do you come up with it? Where did the idea come from? It's so insane and random and nonsensical and clever and HILARIOUS at the same time. I've lost count of the number of times I laughed out loud. Like the introduction to the Ogden twins, and the fact that Todd's wearing a Sombrero and he gets tricked into standing up for an hour, and that thing with the vice-principal- and he's talking about cafeteria food. Brilliant. I love this. 22 and a half chapters in and I am never tired of hearing about Todd.

I do have some con crit- esp since you mentioned in your summary that you're revising. I'd suggest including more about how Todd's Awesome-ness is spreading throuhgout the student body. Cos I like how Todd doesn't want it to spread- he wants people to think for themselves (it's the random bursts of serious wise Todd that I love the best) and I think the story would be even more interesting if you included more about that. Also, we're 22 and ahalf chapters in and I'm not really sure where this story is going... but actually I think that's part of its charm so... Also I had a question- is there any particualr reason why Todd is always referring to Sammy as 'the Jew'? I also find it funny cos I know a Sam who is a Jew and he'd look exactly like your Sammy I reckon, only without the same personality. I'd write more but every time I type the scroll bar is jumping up to the top and it's driving me crazy. i can't even see what i'm writing, so you'll ahve to bear with me if I don't make sense.

haha well thank you so much for a brilliant read. i can't wait to see what Todd's got in store next. And Todd isn't a version anymore? Sure you're not Todd, sure you're not. ;)

OMG BATMAN!

wow.

OMFG. Possibly one of the most hilarious things I have ever read in my life.

Oo, poor Todd, his parents have it hard as well.
eve

Haha I love this story, please write more. Funny, funny stuff...