Tragically sad and very deep. I like your vocabulary and the way you think. This is written very well, and its always good to give yourself time to heal when you lose someone so close to you. Keep writing!

This is a lovely peice. It works for the reader as a fine as a peice of poetry. It works for you as well, because it is a very introspective peice to help sort out emotions. Congats on a lovely peice. God Bless.
-Ivory

I'm so sorry about your grandfather. This piece is beautiful. The emotion is so strong and deep. I love the line "This is a time for blackberries."
Thank you so much for your reviews! I appreciate them greatly!