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| Agent Firefly 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abuseDreams can spark some of the best stories. I can see the metaphor here and you've expressed it in a very haunting way. The imagery is fantastic and gruesome...effective. |
| KASoroka 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abusethis really caught my interest. Nicely done. |
| Miss-Scissorhands 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseWow...I like this. It reminded me about witnessing for Christ. I don't know if that was your intention...but oh well. :) Good job! |