This a humorous short. The narrarator in it seems to be the most humorous of all with her light attitude that just simply accepts things as they come to her.

It's quite odd though that her boyfriend would go to such lenghts just to get her attention. I mean, I've experienced the returning and receiving of items after a break up, but I don't recall it being so dramatic... which made me laugh.

As for critical advice, I don't think there's much that I can point out, except that there were a few typos, and I don't think the words in the parenthesis were that necessary, it would've sounded better without them.

What a goofy little story. This girl breaks up this guy, and then he up and steals all her stuff. It's like a scene from There's Something About Mary. How did he get all this stuff out without her noticing, lke the kitchen sink?

And what happened to her cat? I think it'd be funny if she stopped by one day and there that guy was with her cat in his arms, stroking its fur casually.

Anyhow, pretty funny concept. If you work on your comic delivery, it could be a real buster.

Lol. This was cute :) ..And I'm guessing you got it from 2gether's song Breaking Up is Hard Enough? Haha.

Her flippancy is amusing but even so, I think it should have been longer, with a bit more description but that might just be me. It does get a small 'haha' though but thumbs up anyway.