Oh jeez, this was sad... It's a pretty good play, a bit short I guess. But still really really sad

that was so sad! don't let laura die! :.(

It was so sweet and touching. I didn't like the mild profanities though. Overall, good job.

OMG, AWESOME! It was very sweet and sad and lovely...I also liked the format of it...and I've been intending on writing something like this for sg-1. Have you ever heard of Leann Rime's song called, "I probably wouldn't be this way?" This reminds me of it...beautiful:)

That was beautiful. V. Lovely and amazing! It makes for a v. emotional play... but it was so wonderfully written. Good job.

I hate this *loved it*. It was stupid and depressing *it made me almost cry*. Why the heck did you have to write such a thing? *Wishes I had written it* Whatever *wonderful, beautiful, amazing job*.

Ink&Bleach