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Reviews For: Pretty Little Evening Star

Heart of String
2007-11-22
ch 2,
Hello!I dont know if you know of me, but Doritos recomended you for my reading needs,a nd Im inpressed!She really advised me to read Faerie court, but I will after I work on my OWN stories...(grins)Thanks for the inspiration!And dont thank me, thank Doritos.She's a sociable little one.(waves)

-String
angel-Janna
2007-08-28
ch 2,
this is another interesting one by you... Marla's a lovely little juxtaposition between the nice sweet Rachael and Ben the wee sweetie...
Keep it up (please?? neds morre...!)
Janna
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jackSUN
2007-04-08
ch 2,
um the eyes thing is a little much. btw. :)

but haha.

seven year olds checking her out.

HAHA.

ya sorry.

BYEBYE DINDIN!
FlamingDoritos
2007-04-08
ch 2,
AGH! Well, I tried to discourage you. I tried. It didn't work, but I tried. That's what friends are for, isn't it? Hahaha, I kid. Good job. Marla has self-esteem issues. Bad ones. NOt ot be mean, but it's like listening to you when you're in a bad mood. ^^ I say it because you are my sister and i love you. Well, seeya Tuesday...unless you spontaneously appear in my basement within the next five minutes.
beadlety
2007-03-22
ch 1,
Nice, poetic descriptions with a touch of grungy realism. I like it! I thought the name "The Dumpsters" was an especially nice touch. I have such trouble with names! XD
FlamingDoritos
2007-03-17
ch 1,
Look, I did it! I also seriously did NOT get any alerts for this and that's why it took so long. I'm sorry. ::love:: So...please forgive me, m'dear. It's what you have to do! Anyways, here's your review! I want more. It sounds good...but not as good as TFTFC, which needs to be updated soon, because it's awesome and I love it. I love you. NOW UPDATE!
taddy.
2007-03-13
ch 1,
well I think they're all angels, and duh, leader is god, (hint hint: CREATION).

yeah i started a new story the other day.

but im not really stuck in my story haha.
SunLightsandMoonBeams
2007-03-12
ch 1,
omg, me likey.

ben's so cute!! i'm curious to know more about what's in the tanks, and where exactly ben and his siblings come from.
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