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| Inflaming Kaliope 2007-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseVery sad :( "The gentle blackness Would be lost That small piece Of who you were And who you are Will be snuffed And lie forgotten In cold stone" Beautiful. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's sad, but I think we all feel that way some time in life whether it's for a brief while or a long time. Good poem. I like your penname. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| KASoroka 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was nicely written. However you may want to add some punctuation to this. |