Reviews for Down in the Valley

Jesse the Storyteller 2007-12-18 ch 1,	If the emotions in this poem were brought out more, it would be touching. The way it is, it just seems kind of cliche - like every other Christian poem out there. If you brought out the emotion of Jesus' suffering on the cross and your gratitude for what he did for you, or whatever other emotions you are trying to draw out... it would be powerful and touching. But the way it is now, it's just kind of blah. -Jesse
horse237 2007-07-31 ch 1,	This poems lyrics flow beautifully, and they mean so much! I think I might cry! It's just so beautiful (for lack of a better word)! Your sister in Christ, Horse237
Ivory Marie 2007-03-14 ch 1,	That was beautiful... Please keep writing you have a wonderful way with your words. God bless. -Ivory
xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-12 ch 1,	I love the topic. The last 9 lines really touched me. Lovely job!