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| betweensilence 2007-03-14 ch 1,  | abusei think it's quite short. i think you need more description or anything so we'll have a clearer picture. ^_^ cos right now it seems like just something written on a diary. maybe if u can just add more to it then it'd be a short but powerful piece. God bless!^_^ betweensilence |
| Demon-Ashes 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseUm...it does convey some pretty strong emotions for being what was it 55 words? I would like to see some more elaboration though. Hmm...maybe a little bit of a story behind this mysterious x. demon |