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Reviews For: Leap of Faith

Chasing TeddyBears
2008-09-13
ch 1,
You could totally make a children's book out of this. Not kidding. Ever read "Goodnight Moon" by Margaret Wise Brown? I think kids would get such a kick out of this. In fact, may I have your permission to read this to the kids at my daycare? (I run one, am not IN one, lol).
WeAreBroken
2008-09-03
ch 1,
heh, that was cute.

Have you seen Rent? reminded me..the title and such...
Ash626
2008-08-27
ch 1,
This had great flow and wonderful rhymes, plus it made me giggle like a schoolgirl.
daughterofmusic
2008-01-20
ch 1,
Haha I love it!! I can't even think what to say... keep it up!!
~Daughter of Music
Fantazolic
2007-03-14
ch 1,
Great poem! You've even got the rhythm right and it's really, really good.
Great work,

Fantazolic
Cracknaddicker
2007-03-13
ch 1,
This would make an excellent children's book.
jennilyn.rose
2007-03-12
ch 1,
Haha, I love this. It's really cute. Thanks for the fun read. =)
xDancingintheRainx
2007-03-12
ch 1,
Very cute. ^^ The rhymes don't sound forced and this piece flowed nicely. Well done!
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