 Chasing TeddyBears 2008-09-13 . chapter 1You could totally make a children's book out of this. Not kidding. Ever read "Goodnight Moon" by Margaret Wise Brown? I think kids would get such a kick out of this. In fact, may I have your permission to read this to the kids at my daycare? (I run one, am not IN one, lol). |
 WeAreBroken 2008-09-03 . chapter 1heh, that was cute.
Have you seen Rent? reminded me..the title and such... |
 Ash626 2008-08-27 . chapter 1This had great flow and wonderful rhymes, plus it made me giggle like a schoolgirl. |
 daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Haha I love it!! I can't even think what to say... keep it up!!
~Daughter of Music |
 Fantazolic 2007-03-14 . chapter 1Great poem! You've even got the rhythm right and it's really, really good.
Great work,
Fantazolic |
 pi.scribi 2007-03-13 . chapter 1This would make an excellent children's book. |
 jennilyn.rose 2007-03-12 . chapter 1Haha, I love this. It's really cute. Thanks for the fun read. =) |
 xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-12 . chapter 1Very cute. ^^ The rhymes don't sound forced and this piece flowed nicely. Well done! |