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| Chasing TeddyBears 2008-09-13 ch 1,   | You could totally make a children's book out of this. Not kidding. Ever read "Goodnight Moon" by Margaret Wise Brown? I think kids would get such a kick out of this. In fact, may I have your permission to read this to the kids at my daycare? (I run one, am not IN one, lol). |
| WeAreBroken 2008-09-03 ch 1, | heh, that was cute. Have you seen Rent? reminded me..the title and such... |
| Ash626 2008-08-27 ch 1, | This had great flow and wonderful rhymes, plus it made me giggle like a schoolgirl. |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 ch 1, | Haha I love it!! I can't even think what to say... keep it up!! ~Daughter of Music |
| Fantazolic 2007-03-14 ch 1, | Great poem! You've even got the rhythm right and it's really, really good. Great work, Fantazolic |
| Cracknaddicker 2007-03-13 ch 1, | This would make an excellent children's book. |
| jennilyn.rose 2007-03-12 ch 1, | Haha, I love this. It's really cute. Thanks for the fun read. =) |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-12 ch 1, | Very cute. ^^ The rhymes don't sound forced and this piece flowed nicely. Well done! |