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| ash the arsnist 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abusethis truly intrigued me, the first time i read it i finished and my heart was racing (not quite adrenaline, not quite panic) but it was an interesting feeling. one of those pieces that makes you crave to know the inspiration. "was it me that you hated / (so highly degraded)" especially loved those two lines. great work. |
| jennilyn.rose 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseCreative style. I like it. The bold, the spaces, the underlines. Everything. Great job on emphasizing the emotion. |
| Tytherpol 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI love it. Love it. Awesome. |