haha I like this!! I think the other two reviews you have are funny :)

I'm currently writing a Donnie Darko fanfic in which a girl goes through the tangent universe. I just thought i'd mention 'cuz you're talking about "realities", I'm talking about "universes". yeah. good stuff, Frizz.

Intriguing! It's a good, healthy dose of mindf**k in just a few lines. It kind of reminded me of Stephen King, except not horrendously overwritten.

Cheers,
-Melt-DisneyWorld

I like it. I dont know why you use 3's to divide your paragraphs though. Keep up the good work.