You are a very powerful writer and I love your writing style. You don't sugarcoat things; which I appreciate.
Keep writing!
Elosion12

insight of a suicide attempt...or does she actually do it? hmm. it is really interesting and i have to say, i fell in love with your writing style.

Your story really hits home... We have all felt sadness like this in one point and we have all craved that pain... And to put it in words like this shows true talent. Grammatically its formed really well and the only typo I saw was the use of the wrong to/too where you were talking about if you slice too deep...

Great job.

maybe it's wrong, to call this beautiful. but it is. amazing job.

Everything I'm reading is gold. This being the best. I want to say, great detail, I feel some of the pain right now even. I can smell the blood, seriously.

My point: KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING!

Ooh, this is pretty darn good. Be proud. I love the realism and how you made evrything so crazy.
Triple A+!
Keep writing!

Oh Wow that sucks! I mean, not your story. Your story ROCKS. But what happened was sad. lol. It's so sad how she killed herself, and geez what's up with the guy leaving her for a blonde with a Corvette?? Goodness. lol. I love how realistic this is, and I LOVE how it opens up with the ranging colors and how she's asking for somebody to turn the lights off... adds to her disorientation. I like that! :3 Anywho... I like your whole story. The first-person works super well~~

Later! ^_^

~Raven