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| xx 3DD Fan 2007-06-20 ch 14,  | abuseAww what a great ending! I really enjoyed reading this story and I'll probably read it again sometime. Keep writing more stories! |
| AmberMarieee 2007-05-17 ch 13, | abuseAH! |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-05-04 ch 12, | abuseThat is some real torcher! They better make it! |
| benignbengal 2007-05-03 ch 12, | abuseBut what happens next?! xD I've never seen someone take some many percautions before, I mean, I've never read about someone taking that many percautions to keep someone from escaping. To be honest though, the guys that were trying to help them, their reactions to what just happened seem a little unrealistic. Maybe I just don't get out much. Anyway, thanks for updating and update again soon. =D |
| AmberMarieee 2007-04-27 ch 11, | abuseno! awe come on. that really sucks. and that's so sad, too! The guys come to save them, and they get trapped. what the heck?...gr this is making me angry. lol. update soon! |
| benignbengal 2007-04-26 ch 11, | abuseOh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. Why'd you stop there? Ah! Cliffhangerness. Thank you for posting this, I added it to my alert and favorites, and please continue soon!! ^! |
| AmberMarieee 2007-04-18 ch 10, | abuseOh, what do they hear!?!?! |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-04-16 ch 10, | abuseThey better get out of there soon! Hopefully they heard something good... |
| AmberMarieee 2007-04-12 ch 9, | abusethis just keeps getting worse and worse for them! |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-04-11 ch 9, | abuseomg How awful! The whole time I read this chapter, I felt very closterphobic. haha XD |
| AmberMarieee 2007-04-03 ch 8, | abuseoh come on, you can't just leave the end of the chapter like that!! ah the suspense!! lol. please update soon, i need to know what happens!! =]] |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-04-02 ch 8, | abuseI was so happy that they managed to escape, but now there is a mysterious hole! Ahh, the suspense! |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-03-30 ch 6, | abuseI don't know why you aren't getting a bunch of reviews because you're story = THE best! I love how most of the reviews are mine. haha I think I'm your number 1 fan! XD By the way, this chapter rocks! It made me sad when Jackie started crying. |
| xx 3DD Fan 2007-03-23 ch 5, | abuseYou are so good at writing suspenseful stories! I'm hooked! Now with the bombs and being drugged, I wonder how they'll get out! |
| AmberMarieee 2007-03-20 ch 4, | abusethe suspense! lol I have to know what happens next, this is a good story. Update soon! |