Good. Even with the multiple imageries I get the clear picture of a model or just a girl whose beauty blinds. (It's not that simple though, I know/think.) I very much like "... the/masks that super-glue-global-warming dry onto/her lily-like cheeks.", because "global-warming dry" is an amazing adjective. "she's as quick as they'll ever be" gives the "she" a feeling of great competance, but after that, it seems the poem isn't even talking about her anymore. Perhaps that increases the effect of what's on the surface compared to what's inside. Interesting.

Brilliant. I'm not going to say anything else because that pretty much sums it up.

'brilliant'
reminicant of I WAS A TEENAGE FAIRY( i think that was the story about griffin no actually that IS the story with griffin becuase he gets bitten by mab)
but thats all i could think of when i read it
perfectly amazing and not too over the top that its snobby
it just makes me happy to read your writing

Ella, i miss you so much but i love you even more. and i'm really happy that you've posted something, because i must say that that was AMAZING. i'll surely never be able to write something like this.

** ella that was ** awesome.