..wow..

this is... amazing...

the best poem ever ;)

Wow... that's... amazing. I really love it a lot. Envy can be every color.

Liisha

Your English teacher would be proud.

I agree. Red is the color of envy. Another fantastic poem!

I love how you accented words. However is the entire thing one sentence? If now, then you may want to add Periods where they are needed. That was the only thing I noticed and I read it twice. Good job on this.