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| Nub in Denial 2008-01-02 ch 3,  | abuse... This makes me really sad, but in a good painful way (if that makes any sense) I especially like how you used the repetition of key ideas and phrases to give structure to the piece. I also love how you used understatement and got away with it. Hyperbole is everywhere in a lot of writing but understatement is hard to come by and even harder to come by in a form that does it justice. Terrific job! |
| Kitsune Luvr 2007-05-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo well written and thought provoking. Excellent. I can't get over how talented of a writter you are. Please update something soon! |
| borrowed and blue 2007-04-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseLike the old-fashioned tone this has while clearly being played out in the present. The cleaness of the language. It's nice. And so sad. Reminds me of the fact that my parents are visiting tomorrow, and I haven't told them yet. So I think S.D was pretty brave :) Hope you're just having writer's block and not total life block. All the best. Lou |
| Finger Dingbat 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abusethats... just so sad - but beautiful. but sad. but true. sometimes i feel i am emotionally limited by my own vocabulary. keep up thease... whatever they are. i enjoyed it. |
| Casey.Duh 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI think we should all just rebel against our parents! Like kill them or something! ... Maybe not something so "DEATH!" They should... fall in a small hole... There we go. Rebel against them by tripping in a small hole. Yeah... |
| magalina 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuse:/ Poor Travis... I like the style you used in this one :) |