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Carmel March 2008-02-04 ch 22,	abuseEven though it's been awhile since I've been on Fictionpress, I've definitely not forgotten this story. I'm loving it! It's this kind of story that keeps me coming back for more. So, I hope to see more from you soon :) ~Carm~
storys 2007-12-31 ch 21,	abuseYou're right. This is the WORST chapter! Seriously, so long and this is it... I'm disappointed. So does that mean that Crystal likes Johnny?
Carmel March 2007-12-05 ch 20,	abuseThat was amazingly amazing. Even though it's been awhile since I've set eyes on this story (about which I am terribly sorry about!), I immediately got right back into it the moment I started reading. This story keeps getting deeper and even more interesting. Keep up this wonderful work, and I'm looking forward to reading more :) ~Carm~
storys 2007-11-29 ch 20,	abuse...Gyung? What. Everyone's being bad!! Haha. What's so good about Crystal anyways? Guys are crazy. Seriously. I don't know what to write in this review... I guess I'm waiting for something MAJOR to happen. Update soon!
Carmel March 2007-11-11 ch 19,	abuseI'm here, I'm here! I'm still alive! Sorry I took so long to read and review! Time is an issue these days. Really wonderful job you're doing, as always. I was so glad to see an update in my inbox. So, keep up this superamazingness. I can't wait to read more :) ~Carm~
storys 2007-11-06 ch 19,	abuseHuh. Nice I guess. Interesting. Whatever. Um. I don't get the end. No yacht? Huh?? Anyways, sorry about the review. I have to study for my Spanish test :D Hurry up and update because I don't like transition chapters!
Rudolf Zen 2007-10-28 ch 18, anon.	abuseI like how you left some things to the reader's imagination, like "With a wink, I did what he bided and closed the door gently". The imagery is getting stronger now, good job! I'm surprised there was no development between Ray and Crystal though. Well, I'm sure something major will happen between them at the beach.
storys 2007-10-28 ch 18,	abuseHa, you're wrong. I thought this chapter was actually quite nice. It wasn't a boring transition chapter, and it got to the point. The descriptions, although i didn't like the first one, was quite clear. I liked the rushing by like elementary kids one, especially the "No Running" sign. The ending was more complete, and it gave more suspense than the other chapters. Good job! Update soon, because it's getting interesting.
Rudolf Zen 2007-10-21 ch 17, anon.	abuseJohnny is sensitive, but something tells me something fishy is going on between Ray and Crystal. Guys never do favors like that.I like this though, twists make the story much more interesting and makes me want to read on to see what happened.
Carmel March 2007-10-20 ch 17,	abuseI'm really, truly amazed at how this story is only getting better and better. With every new chapter, I'm even more impressed with your talents as a writer. Keep up this superly duperly great work! ~Carm~ PS I'm so very very sorry for not reviewing sooner! It may take me awhile to read and review, but just know that I still am, 'kay? :)
storys 2007-10-13 ch 17,	abuseHey. Hmm...a lot of typos. The first part was interesting. The end wasn't. Maybe it's because I read it in two different times. The thing about Michelle is so unrealistic that I don't like it. Would she spend so much money on people she barely know, even if one was her so-called boyfriend? And, logically, which girl in the right mind would go on a vacation with guys she barely knows? Sorry, I'm in a bad mood. But, seriously. Or maybe I'm just jealous. Anyways, it's good. But the plot really has to get going and there needs to be more happening, each linking to the next. Ok, so, I'm just being fussy. Update soon!
Grace Loh 2007-10-13 ch 17, anon.	abusehahahah..Johnny the sensitive guy...getting jealous and everything..sounds really familiar..LOL...anw...i never expected Robert to turn into a somewhat nice guy..i thought that part kinda made the story more interesting ...switching antagonists...tht was good...and last thing...FINISH IT! i wanna noe wt happens..
Grace Loh 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon.	abusehey..dude...hurry up and update! LOL...seriously...it's realli annoying when i have to be left in suspense, LOL...anw...great story writing ...and honestly...you realli shouldn't have canceled "Untitled"..i was really looking forward to it..btw..question..where did you get the idea for Robert? the way you portrayed him was realli done veri nicely...cuz now i hate that character...haha
Rudolf Zen 2007-10-12 ch 16, anon.	abuseI agree with Carmel March about how this story leaves a strong impression as even after months I still remember the plot and characters. This is mainly due to the fact that they reflect people we know in real life. This is not as fictional as I thought it would be. It is heavily based on events that have actually occurred in your life, but stuffed into a short time period and exaggerated.
Arthisa 2007-10-07 ch 16, anon.	abuseHi! I'm Anne-Claire, Oki's friend at Dulwich, she gave me the address of your story. That's the first netfiction that's not a fanfic that I've ever read so I can't really say if it's good or not, but it's quite interesting. To be honest, I find the plot of the story so far a bit too unreal, as these things are highly unlikely to happen. And I don't really like Robert's character, though I'm not sure if he's supposed to be a good guy in this fiction. Anyway, I think it's a great job you've done so far. I've tried to write myself but I never get past two pages...

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