Sounds nice. Where this retake is going. I like how just changing a little bit has revamped the whole story. It's cute.

Please update! This story is too adorable. I loved the original so much and would love to see this redux version!

I think I'll like ATY better-maybe because it came first, and that's how I'm used to it.

I feel like I might need to change their names when I read this to get everything out of the story, prolly cause I'll be biased.

It bothered me that she wasn't the naive easygoing girl. Eh. You'll be hearing back from me :P

FUCK FELICITY SHES A SLUTTISH HOE?

FUCK FELICITY

FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU YOUR HORRIBLE WHY ARE YOU CORRUPTING LEIF I HATE YOU !K I FUCKIN HATE YOU!

I HATE YOU MADE SIENNA SOUND LIKE A SLUTTY BICTCHY WHORE AND A FUCKIN BLONDE DITZ OR BIMBO AND WHY MAKE LEIF COCKY AGAIN?

I HATE YOU MADE SIENNA SOUND LIKE A SLUTTY BICTCHY WHORE AND A FUCKIN BLONDE DITZ OR BIMBO AND WHY MAKE LEIF COCKY AGAIN?

Please write more T_T!

I just found this, and once I got to the end I decided to check the date on this to see if you would be updating soon. I actually screamed at my laptop when I saw that this was last updated in 2007. Just in case that you miraculously decide to return to this story, I'm going to add it to my story alerts. It's a great story.

when are you gonna update this?

i don't get leif.. he doesnt really really really like felicity at all.. so what was he doing?

i hope you could update this soon.. )

ok

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FUCKING AMAZING! I just sat here for like an hour and a half or two hours just to read this. It's amazing. Update soon.

Leif. Hot. Felicity? Fuck off. Sienna? FUCK THE HOE! Leif? Mine. (:

-Abbey

aw there's no chapter 12! :O

lol i just read this straight from the first version, and am loving the differences. that's such a great idea, turning it round completely, yet only changing half the plot. well done

can't be fun, being such a bitch. hope sienna dumps popularty soon...

ta, :D

med