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| Casey Drake 2007-03-16 ch 1,   | I LIKE!! *nodnod* it's amazing sometimes... I love the end... :) CD |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-03-14 ch 1, | Beautifully done! I have to add this to my C2! Best Wishes! (TSP) |
| Nemonus 2007-03-14 ch 1, | Good. Your words are varied and you give a sense of fantasy, with the terms such as Hilt, and of reality, as in the parts about the bridges. The poem has a good point to it. The characterization of the engineer, done by her description, determination, and at the end, pride, is well done. The rhythm and rhyme is almost perfect. "others cliff sides" ought to be 'others' cliff-sides". Otherwise, fine job. |