Very weird... in a good way.

Your full title reminds me of a song name. I had a fish that ate another fish once.

I enjoyed reading it though it left a kind of sour taste in m mouth. Maybe because they died.

Woah. First reaction: twisted in a very strange way. Second reaction: I like pools. Realization: they drowned.

Whoa. A very unique drabble, holding nothing back and completely unashamed. The imagery and implications are powerful. Frightening.

I enjoyed the endding. I thought it was funny. I laughed. Still am. Why do I find that so funny? I'm not sure.

It's interesting. You should have probably broken this up into separate paragraphs. Can't wait to see what happens.. i'm assuming this is a prologue