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| munchiekins 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseYour full title reminds me of a song name. I had a fish that ate another fish once. I enjoyed reading it though it left a kind of sour taste in m mouth. Maybe because they died. |
| Marajohuiki 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWoah. First reaction: twisted in a very strange way. Second reaction: I like pools. Realization: they drowned. |
| Lady E 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. A very unique drabble, holding nothing back and completely unashamed. The imagery and implications are powerful. Frightening. |
| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed the endding. I thought it was funny. I laughed. Still am. Why do I find that so funny? I'm not sure. |
| Onion Ring 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseIt's interesting. You should have probably broken this up into separate paragraphs. Can't wait to see what happens.. i'm assuming this is a prologue |