the last word 'twilight' is brilliance, simply amazing. I love how it's death and then new life, ending of industrial, beginning of nature, great job this is amazing.

does a falling tree make a sound
when no one is there?

I think that the most random of thoughts/moments make our lives beautiful and livable. If everything was made of earth shattering cycles then we would be drained and dead before we reached adulthood. Anyway, I really enjoyed this moment in time. I think that everyone in life has had that split second of looking around and being at ease with the world. This is what that reminds me of. Lovely work. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Your poems never get old. They always have some sort of destructive beauty in them that not many people can capture.

I really like the wording in this.