Once again you are able to bring th magic back to free verse. The way you put your words bring free verse out of shame and into a rhymatic beauty. I have no harsh critisizm for this poem. Though I'd have to say Ashton Park was my favorite. In this poem you are able to capture the boredom and the oppresion felt in the class room with a modern yet Hellenistic style.
I absolutely adore your style. I only harp because it's not long enough (LOL) I wish your poetry was longer. Because I love to read it! Your poetry is possitively stunning and mind blowing. You must be a college student or something like that.

This is a really cool poem! I'm not sure I completely follow, but there are parts of it to which I can relate. Great job!