this story is amazing so many people are still reading, i made an account jsut to tell you to keep writning it i understand your busy but please please finsih this story, i think it would be cute to have Oz and aleta fall in love just a suggetion! thanks

Wow! This story is really creative, in my opinion. I hope you can update it soon! I love all your other stories, too, =]

UPDATE IT. now! this is an awesome story, and it should not be denied the update, so UPDATE IT

You didn't think anyone would be reading this story? -_-

TWO YEARS I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR NEW CHAPTERS.

so umm yeah...can you post some more seeing as how loyal I have been? TY. =]

I don't understand about the Colors. In the beginning she says that green doesn't exist, and yet they clearly know what green is. Is green just a color that isn't used on the people's wrists?

i think this story is pretty interesting and that you should continue it ;]

I'm still reading too! And I'm still quite intrigued...

=)
CL

This is a really interesting story; the idea behind it is intriguing, and it has managed to remain compelling throughout. More chapters (y) :)

I don't know what to say, as I can't really express my thoughts at the moment.

A relevent and subtle message = win

So far I appreciate the theme of this! It's almost deterministic in a sense where one cannot choose what they do as it is already going to happen. It's a world bent so much on having an established order and control, almost communist in a sense.

Gonna keep reading!

One minor mispelling in the sentence about her pondering if she was going to be turned into black, I think you meant "then" not "than" right?

Either way, the suspense is building up and I really love suspense and surprise in a story. But I somehow predict that people with green tattoos are magical in someway.

There is virtually nothing wrong with your story so far, grammatically or plot wise and I am enjoying it very much so.

The orange part really confused me for second! lol. Getting more and more interesting.

Wow, I like this alot, but the summary and the book title have really given away alot of the suspense. I know what's going to happen and that dissapoints me a little, either way, I'm starting to really like this =D

Thank-you for updating. I'm glad you were willing to continue. I'm sure more people will read it now that you've updated- often an uncompleted story that hasn't been updated in a couple of years will be passed over as most people see it as something that may never be continued.
Anyways - I really love this story. I hope she gets some answers soon before she becomes too frustrated with only criptic replies. I think she needs to start questioning Magus and he needs to start giving her answers. Perhaps she can accompany Oz into Magus' room when he goes in to report and refuse to leave when Magus asks her to (at least I'd expect him to want to keep whatever they are discussing from her).
Please update as soon as you can, and thanks for updating again :)

Of course people are reading! I've been waiting for an update for like, ever!

Wonderful update, by the way.