Um. Well then. I'm confused. I don't know. It was good, I'll give you that. I liked the layout, if that's the word I'm looking for.

The whole poem really made me giggle, I'm not sure, maybe that's where you were going with this.

The topic of things being beneath her "bosom," as you said, was a little...strange, to say the least.
Yes, I liked it, I was just a little lost.

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i really love sth short and simple~~so this one make it to my heart! lovely piece of art!

very very good! i love the shaping of the piece!

I love the stucture and benath the 'bossom ' of this 'abstract' was true emotion. My only crit is it is too short and I'm not sure about the word bossom...

Wow, I never stumbled onto this one till now. How lovely the metaphor :) Good job, I'm adding this one to favorites

Lovely. The line "Like a parchment/beneath her bosom" particularly struck me. It's original. I love it!

truly interesting and beautiful. tis different.