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| fatchickengirl 2008-10-26 ch 1,   | I love the stucture and benath the 'bossom ' of this 'abstract' was true emotion. My only crit is it is too short and I'm not sure about the word bossom... |
| Fan Fan 2007-12-02 ch 1, | Wow, I never stumbled onto this one till now. How lovely the metaphor :) Good job, I'm adding this one to favorites |
| Unimportant 2007-03-13 ch 1, | Lovely. The line "Like a parchment/beneath her bosom" particularly struck me. It's original. I love it! |
| desolateflowermaiden 2007-03-13 ch 1, | truly interesting and beautiful. tis different. |