Reviews for Nothing is Forever

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Dasiy 2008-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseROCKED!!~~
IiotComputerLetMeOn 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseCute story!
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-05-07 ch 22,	abuseWow, I ABSOLUTELY loved it! It was such a great ending to a wonderful story. I love how the reader can like draw their own conclusion of the story, the way it was so well written, everything. Good job, congrats on finishing a wonderful story, I really enjoyed every bit of it. :)
Ambergirl1029 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abusehello, since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams thank you, Amber
Elle Winters 9 2008-04-24 ch 22,	abuseIt's supposed to be a happy ending, I can conclude that much, but the quote you had at the bottom after you finished makes it seem as it it's a sad ending and that maybe Justin already started loving another girl already. Please write an epilogue, it's so ominous right now.. and hopefully it's happy >< sigh* me and my need for happy happy endings =P
xoxo1 2008-04-23 ch 22,	abuseomg, its over?? is there going to be a sequel to it? an epilogue would be nice, but maybe a sequel too?
RunFree 2008-04-23 ch 22, anon.	abuseEPILOGUE! Oh you are the only person that got me to cry three times...that's good!:))
Skyfeather2 2008-04-22 ch 22,	abusewow! until I got the email alerting me to this new chapter I completely forgot about this story. It's been such a long time.. at least for me. I actually had to reread previous chapters to remember what had happened recently. So yes, very nice conclusion I get why he broke up with her but I don't see why his mother couldn't find a rehab place in China.. or at least someplace in Europe/Asia. The story's better with the whole Canada thing but you know.. it would have been nice for everyone to be happy at the conclusion of the story even if that isn't always so. I love the use of fin it just sounds better than 'The End', more elegant somehow, 'The End' makes me think of the finish of big action movies in theaters. The poem is also a nice touch, it pulls in the title which hadn't made much sense until the end of the story brought it into consideration (in my mind at least). It's nice when you don't outright explain the meaning of every little thing but give just enough hints to prompt the reader to find their own answers. Bravo with this. Persoanlly, I like the way you finished this story- it lets us imagine what we think would happen. And if people complain that it isn't a 'happy ending' then maybe they should reconsider this phrase. In life nothing ever Ends, it may pause or stall with some emotion but the only true Ending is death. And when is death Ever happy? Even in fiction, the character's lives don't end when the story is finished, they are continued in people's imaginations, always changing. If you added an epilogue it would be okay, I'd definitely read it. But it isn't necessary. I mean all it would do was ensure or condemn their happiness and state some decisions that we could think of ourselves in different ways. Like the name of Ken and Erin's baby. I'd like to know what you would name it, but I've ideas of my own and I'm sure everyone else does too. The other things are the same way, you can make them for the characters and let us all know in an epilogue because you Are the writer and they are your characters, but if you don't that's okay too. Overall really good story, it kept me gripped while I was reading it and even when I forgot and came back to it, it gripped me up again making me stay up Way past the time I usually go to bed because I HAD to finish it =D. Thanks for sharing your writing with us but the epilogue is Your choice, not ours.
Unique Child 2008-04-21 ch 22,	abuseOh my god! I would so kill you if they didn't get together at the end. This was so cute. It made me tear up a little. So, are you doing an epilogue? Great job, I love this story!
writing.life.2.4 2008-04-21 ch 22,	abuseOMG I LUV IT BUT I CANT BELIEVE HE BROKE UP WITH HER. i mean he had a great reason but i was freaking out. i practically scared the living daylights out of my friend tom when i found out. great job i LUV the poem at the end, its so true. great great great job congratulations!! i know wat its like to write FIN at the end, its AMAZING. i think an epilouge mite be good but idk if its pushing it. i'm kind of neutral. great great great great great i really luv it! so much happened in this chpater! CONGRATS GREAT JOB =]
Elle Winters 9 2008-04-14 ch 21,	abuseuh oh.. no happy ending? i depend upon happy endings, that's all the stories i basically ever read! oh wait u said rarely.. therefore there is still a chance that there's going to b a happy ending! YAY! well any way update soon! i'm sorry i haven't reviewed in awhile, but i've been busy.
dj-baker 2008-03-24 ch 21,	abusehey great chapter! ken is such sweet heart! one little thing and please dont take it the wrong way its just some kind of wierd advice: try to not write alot of "I LOVE YOU"s even if it's said by there eyes coz it kind of takes all the sweetness from it. (actions speak louder then words)if you know what i mean, to make the words special they should only be used VERY few times maybe even just once, i dont know its your story but just thought i'd give my opinion coz your story is just fab! =) soz for babbling please up date soon ~i was born brilliant but education ruined moi ;p ~
Skyfeather2 2008-03-22 ch 21,	abuseVery nice chapter =D I love that you managed to wrap up everything I metnioned without messing with the flow of the story. Kelly and Tom? I think thats really funny for some reason.. but also very clever =) I'm glad you decided to write another chapter, its a great story and I want to read more. Also veryy happy that Erin's dad came to the graduation =) it would have been so sad if no one came. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update as soon as life allows you to =D
writing.life.2.4 2008-03-22 ch 21,	abuseomg really fast update! really sad chapter but happy too! graduations ARE always sad but happy. can't believe erin and ken actulally left!! and i can't believe justin's leaving! i hope the whole bulimia thing gets solved great job! VERY well written chapter!
Rhythm.Of.My.Soul 2008-03-22 ch 21,	abuseGREAT CHAPTER! I am SO HAPPY that it's not the last chapter, I was so sad to be seeing the last of these characters. Wow, everyone's leaving, growing older and stuff. It's so sad and it keeps reminding me of my upcoming graduation. (TWO MORE MONTHS!!) Anyway, the chapter was VERY well written filled with lots of wonderful events, ideas and very cute scenes. Good job!

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