This poem brings forth the memories of having loved and lost and questioning why...

This poem also evokes emotion and thought; it is really truly amazing. You did a great job, and really, I don't care that it doesn't rhyme or really have much rhythm either, the thought and emotion that it pulls out is amazing. Who needs rhyme and rhythm anyway? Life doesn't rhyme, nor does it seem to have any rhythm to it.

Happy writing. And thanks for putting "I Won't Forget" onto your faves. =]

-STIX-

Truer words were never spoken.

Though I don't agree with you, I think that this is beautiful. It is a terrible thing to lose love, but I still find it beautiful. Great job.