|Reviews for Veiling Reality|
| herpius derpius7 3/14/07 . chapter 1
This was spectacular.
"You gave me wings in stories / that didn't fly."
"You tore down castles and walls / that were paper."
I especially love those two lines; they just sort of speak to me, and strike my heart.
| Beloved Truth 3/14/07 . chapter 1
Good work! I really like your poem. I am going to add this to my C2!
| Nemonus 3/14/07 . chapter 1
Very interesting. I am unsure of your exact stand, or whether the addresséd "you" is fictional or not, but emotion is there and "faded" is a powerful word with what exists here behind it. The only line I'd fix is as follows; I don't see that "with a deep breath" adds to the theme. Pretty good poem.