This is good work; one of your better poems. I appreciated the idea of this being spiritual and portaining to Christ's sacrifice while pretty much avoiding being preachy. That iwll appeal to a broader audience, though sometimes a poem is geared towards a spacific audience to begin with regardness.

You did spell brokenness "brokeness" but I didn't see any other typeOs.

You have some suggestive images in there which I think worked pretty well.

Remy/The Blind Guardian