it's disgusting and intense and freakishly imaginative and very very good. I'm not sure the ending suited it, I think I would have liked it to go on a bit longer, it was an anticlimactic conclude in my opinion...the poem led up to a bit more and then...it ended. It was a bit unaccounted for. but other than that, it's wonderfully...i don't know what the word is. When you can realy really see what you're talking about. I loved the black mold, how you described it, i felt it, i really did. I could smell it and see it and taste it and i licked my lips to make sure it wasn't there and breathed deeper and could feel myself becoming clostrophobic. Oh, you did a very good job on this. ^_^