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| luv me like no other 2007-09-30 ch 1,  | abusenice. |
| in a jar pk 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseoh wow. :) |
| sleeping with ghosts 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. It's one of my favorites of yours. I especially like the line "like i'm cheap al dente pasta". I think it gives the poem real flavor whatever that means lol. Very nice job. |
| PM20 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery in this poem, I could see each line in my head, and I like the way you used short lines to break up the poem. It gives the poem a cool sound when read aloud. Thanks for sharing. |
| Ashelin 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, I can totally relate to this. It was wonderful. Emotional and detatched at the same time. Wonderful job. |