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Kohlomere 2008-07-01 ch 18,	abuseOn with the date! Great work, E.
Jessiquie 2008-07-01 ch 18, anon.	abuseHey. You have no idea how happy i was and excited when i saw the email saying a new chapter of this story. Its one of my all time faves, and while you may not be a published author in terms of this story being in a paperbook, I absoutely adore it and rank it up there! Seriously, when my mates, who asks me all the time, which stories/books i like, I also refer to this one as well! I even told her to read it, and she told her sister to read it! lol! :) Anywyas sorry to have use not my logged in account, but since you redid this chapter i can't review it as per my signed in acocunt cuz i already have reviewed chapter 18 (Accoutn via same name). Anyways. I really like the changes to this chapter you made and how you extended it. It works well and solves problems from before. I.e. Noah's hyperventing :) Poor Ruth! She seriosuly has no clue! Please tell me that he really didn't ask her out because she may have brought it up. Pretty sure he didn't due to hand holding and all, but still! Still my fave story! Loved a millions! Update soon! Can't wait for more! Jessiquie
Cinnia Aine 2008-05-26 ch 17,	abuseI like how the story is moving along. The grammar/spelling mistakes don't bother me at all. This story is a definite favorite of mine. :)
Cinnia Aine 2008-05-23 ch 1,	abuseThis story is great! I love the plotline!
Colleen 2008-05-05 ch 8, anon.	abuseI just found your story and I love it, but there a few mistakes I noticed right away while reading thig chapter. -“Quickly, Kerida, I have something to show you," Unless Kerida is a Jewish endearment, I think you mean 'querida' which means 'dear' in Spanish. -"Not everyone can have such a roll model" It should be role, not roll. - “See you then.” “Nona!” This isn't so much a mistake as it is confusing. You should add a line in explaining Ruth said that after getting the phone. These aren't all the mistakes, but I wasn't really looking for mistakes. I hope this helps!
I Quoth Nevermore 2008-04-10 ch 18,	abusefantabulous! I liked this, even if it was short. What's with Noah hyperventilating? That's odd, and quirky, so it makes for a good character. Anyways, love this, so update soon!
the kitten 2008-04-10 ch 18,	abuseyou know, Jacob Kirshenbaum actually means "Jacob Cherry Tree" :) hurry up with the next one, would you?
Jessiquie 2008-04-07 ch 18,	abuseohh awkward tension. Thats so cute... anf finally there going on a date. But he doesn't really seem as though he really wants to go on a date? did she really force him to? And whats with his little panic attack? he doesn't panic. Either way interesting turn of events. Can't wait to read more! thanks for the quick update!
The Wind Charmer 2008-04-07 ch 16,	abuseby the way, and this is for chapter 18, do you take ballet? cause i was wondering why you know so much about it. is ballet hard, and what are point shoes? oh, and am i the 100th review? just asking. laterz, TWC PS: Please review my story.
The Wind Charmer 2008-04-07 ch 18,	abusedid she force him to ask her out? i mean, it was either that or he was playing hard to get. can guys even play hard to get? i thought that was a girl thing.
abyssgirl 2008-04-07 ch 18,	abuseI think - you're going to hate me for this, because I'll sound awfully contrary - that you just rushed this chapter. Seriously. You should have slowed the pace down - in the attempt to appease your readers' curiosity, you kind of just seemed to spit out the first thing that came to mind. Anyway, with that all said and done, would you mind reviewing my new story? It's called 'New Beginnings'. Thanks! ^_^ ~ KJ
jacksy 2008-04-07 ch 16,	abuseI mean still does, god I am not on the ball today!
Jessiquie 2008-04-07 ch 17,	abuseI. Love. This. Story! this is by far one of my fave stories! published authors included, its your characters that do it i think. They are so realistic and understandable. And I just love it. Please update soon. Can't wait for more... I love the bits between Noah and Ruth...so good!
jacksy 2008-04-07 ch 17,	abusejust read all 12 chapters at once, this is a great story, really well written, and it flows well, making it easy and enjoyable to read. I like the concept, original. Am I right in thinking Isaac may just have a tiny crush? It's the vibe I'm getting
abyssgirl 2008-04-07 ch 17,	abuseOk, erm... is this turning into an Isaac/Ruth fic? I'm really confused, cos even after 17 chapters, she's gotten further with Isaac than she has with Noah. Kinda... worrying, seeing as you seemed to start out as a Noah fan.

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