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| AlbanianAtHeart 2007-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseOh man I love legos! They're so fun! Anyway, great poem. I like the first stanza the best. |
| wednesdayhunter 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseooh, that happened ALL the time.. aww the memories.. (is feeling nostalgic) mori |
| Professional Dreamer 2007-04-30 ch 1, | abuse*grins really wide* LEGO DAYS!! *goes and raids brother's lego box* You have just rekindled my love for Lego! Thank you! |
| The Talented Mr. Evan 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseYay Legos! They're so much fun! It was very nicely written: simple enough for a child to understand but still mature because it's remembering your childhood. The mother yelling to pick up the Legos struck a cord with me. They should put your poem on Lego boxes. Every day can be Lego day, Wilkem18. |
| Tytherpol 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI read this like a month ago in the c2, but I guess I didn't review it for some reason, so I'm reviewing it now. It's good. Carefree, but it's got the sadness of future in it. Nice. |
| pretty much the best userna... 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abusei went to like lego school when i was younger. i could deffinatly school anyone. actually.. I was never that good. nice little poem though. |
| .Lila AE. 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abusehaha I loved legos very nicely done |
| Swish2 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abusethis is awesome hahahahaha but yeah i liked it and it brought back memories when i used to buy lego star wars kits and build them throw them and rebuild them SWISH |
| Joshua Amir Franco-Torres-J... 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI remember building high stacks with my cousins only to watch it topple over. And I remember the mother of my cousins complaining. Interesting how you hit the mark with that memory that many people will probably have. Good job. |
| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseAWW! that is so cute! I like it! Going into the C2!! --SHookie |
| lordelfy 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseAWW! i love this, it really reminds me of my childhood. My brother and i would always spend countless hours playing with legos. Great poem and thanks for bringing back such great memories!! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThis piece makes me want to turn back the clock and be a kid again. Nicely written; keep writing! |