This was another great poem my favorite lines were

Because you helped me live

Life another day

In the fullest way

That was perfect.

SirScott

The lengths of the lines changed in some of the stanzas, so the flow was thrown of a little bit, but besides that it was really good. ("Yet you’ve given me, your world to see/Suddenly I feel so bound/What can I say, when you’ve given away" Play with those lines maybe?)

Rowan.

This song would be the opener to my life soundtrack right now! So much is there in these words, yet so much is still looming beneath the surface. I would love to hear this put to a melody.

That was awesome! You're a brilliant writer! I loved the rhythm of it! Wonderful job! :D

I love those lines

"There is no we

Both different persons

You and me

The friendship worsens"

In the line "Get you’ve given me, your world to see" do you mean yet? I wasn't sure.

Once again, great job.