|Reviews for Stranger Secrets|
| SirScott 3/16/07 . chapter 1
This was another great poem my favorite lines were
Because you helped me live
Life another day
In the fullest way
That was perfect.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 3/16/07 . chapter 1
The lengths of the lines changed in some of the stanzas, so the flow was thrown of a little bit, but besides that it was really good. ("Yet you’ve given me, your world to see/Suddenly I feel so bound/What can I say, when you’ve given away" Play with those lines maybe?)
| DiamondSoledShuz 3/16/07 . chapter 1
This song would be the opener to my life soundtrack right now! So much is there in these words, yet so much is still looming beneath the surface. I would love to hear this put to a melody.
| iliveinadreamworld 3/14/07 . chapter 1
That was awesome! You're a brilliant writer! I loved the rhythm of it! Wonderful job! :D
| a silenced revolution 3/14/07 . chapter 1
I love those lines
"There is no we
Both different persons
You and me
The friendship worsens"
In the line "Get you’ve given me, your world to see" do you mean yet? I wasn't sure.
Once again, great job.