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Dragon society 2007-04-03 . chapter 1
Hey chelsea nice story( kind of creepy but I wont say that out loud)

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The Melodious Nocturne 2007-03-19 . chapter 1
I like : D It was sometimes hard to understand, but I'm stupid so...like you might want to put more descriptaveness in it. It made me smile when I read the comic relief. I think that every story should have some. Alot of things tend to get too depressing(for example my stoy) so keep it up, an have fun wit it!
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Arlywn 2007-03-15 . chapter 1
You're right, the format was a bit odd. Second person almost always is. I like the way its second person, you captured that beautifully. It was well written, and made me smile. I normally do not like reading others work( I am spoiled on published authors.) I liked it though. I hope you write more things.
braindead1345 2007-03-14 . chapter 1
i dont know why, but that last about the nicotine patchs really cheer me up...nice peom/narrative/what ever you want to call it.
ArmedDoomMuffins 2007-03-14 . chapter 1
M. This was enjoyable. I could almost imagine this playing on like, a crackly recornding in this sweetly monotone vioce.
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