this is good.. i like it.. i know i am not a very good critiquer.. if that is a word but that was part of the deal.. =)

I like the meaning of this poem. You are very good at writing them. :)

Please note that I wrote this soon after a bad break-up, so it is going to be a bit bitter and sarcastic, I'm afriad. Sorry if you don't like it.

um...ok depressing

get over him already! though, this was a great poem, it was christmas when you broke up, and you hadn't been getting along for a while. but, alas, the best inspiration is from tragedy,no?well, loves, and don't go emo on me about this!
Dragon

This had some nice moments but it needed... more. You used a lot of sarcasm, and while it did show your disgust it didn't reveal true hurt or anger... the sarcasm here makes the meaning somewhat... empty... meaningless, I suppose. Not that it didn't say some nice things - I liked the way you played with expressions (i.e. actions speak louder, can't hear). Not a bad poem - definitely worth some revising!

abby