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Reviews For: Chemical Attraction

SY Iceflake77
2008-03-31
ch 1,
Awesome work. Could make for a very nice song! I like your topic of choice; very realistic.
Hector Tailies
2007-06-19
ch 1,
this is a really cool poem in that the visual eleemnt of the poem adds another characteristic to the poem. Interesting. Keep it up

Andy
Violet Marx
2007-03-14
ch 1,
/Wow/.
I loved the rhythm, the assonance and rhyming.
And it was PRETTY.
It made my eyes smile.
And an interesting subject.
bratja
2007-03-14
ch 1,
This was really good. The bold, italicized, and decorative words really added to the piece.

Excellent.
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