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| SY Iceflake77 2008-03-31 ch 1, | Awesome work. Could make for a very nice song! I like your topic of choice; very realistic. |
| Hector Tailies 2007-06-19 ch 1, | this is a really cool poem in that the visual eleemnt of the poem adds another characteristic to the poem. Interesting. Keep it up Andy |
| Violet Marx 2007-03-14 ch 1, | /Wow/. I loved the rhythm, the assonance and rhyming. And it was PRETTY. It made my eyes smile. And an interesting subject. |
| bratja 2007-03-14 ch 1, | This was really good. The bold, italicized, and decorative words really added to the piece. Excellent. |