 i kiss to tell 2007-06-30 . chapter 1wow, that was really well written! you truely have a gift. |
 don't give me no sass quach 2007-04-22 . chapter 1" "Take my hand." She said to you, and what she really meant was: Love me. "
i love that. i think 90% of what i say to people really means love me.
that one word thing seems pretty interesting. it's pretty cool how you write this entirely based on solo. lovelylovelylovely. |
 mizu no kokoro 2007-04-05 . chapter 1wow. your writing is as always, impressive. =] well done
keep writing |
 lackluster 2007-04-02 . chapter 1i love how you wrote this around the word solo, or so it seems. inspiration?
"This is you and her in the crossroads between insanity and something else; something you don't really want to know.
(Something that feels a lot like love.)" i love that. i love love love that. because you convey that feeling, that jumbled and yet wondrous feeling, so damn well.
nicely done. |
 she smolders 2007-03-17 . chapter 1I don't think people ever say what they mean. This is lovelier than words can say. Take care. |
 Severiona Black 2007-03-15 . chapter 1I love this...it's very poetic, and beautiful! |
 Katrina Zeffirelli 2007-03-15 . chapter 1this is really good! =) |