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| i kiss to tell 2007-06-30 ch 1,  | abusewow, that was really well written! you truely have a gift. |
| don't give me no sass quach 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuse" "Take my hand." She said to you, and what she really meant was: Love me. " i love that. i think 90% of what i say to people really means love me. that one word thing seems pretty interesting. it's pretty cool how you write this entirely based on solo. lovelylovelylovely. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abusewow. your writing is as always, impressive. =] well done keep writing |
| lackluster 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abusei love how you wrote this around the word solo, or so it seems. inspiration? "This is you and her in the crossroads between insanity and something else; something you don't really want to know. (Something that feels a lot like love.)" i love that. i love love love that. because you convey that feeling, that jumbled and yet wondrous feeling, so damn well. nicely done. |
| she smolders 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI don't think people ever say what they mean. This is lovelier than words can say. Take care. |
| Severiona Black 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this...it's very poetic, and beautiful! |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abusethis is really good! =) |