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| Katherine-the-greate 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseinteristing chapter. I didn't like the first part very much because it seemed to drag on forever. once the princess came into the story things went faster and were much more interisting to read. thanks for posting this. do you plan to post more? |
| LittleDoe 2007-09-03 ch 3, | abuseWhat a wonderful story! I hope Grace continues it. It is written very well, and has a suspensful and action filled plot line. Please continue! God Bless you. ~LittleDoe |
| RangeRider 2007-06-06 ch 3, | abuseAgain, you have done well! Or should I say fantastic? This was another awesome chapter; please write more! |
| RangeRider 2007-05-26 ch 2, | abuseGripping, well written, suspenseful, action packed--Great going! Please update soon. |
| Miss-Scissorhands 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a very good beginning. The first sentence is hooking, and the last half of it shows that the writer knows what he/she is doing and that his/her vocabulary is larger and more used than other stories. It had a LOTR/Eragon crossover feel to it (and I like both of those). I'm putting this on my Story Alert list. Good job! |