I think you should definitely write more. This story is engaging. You'd better update this! Oh, and Personal Trainer, too.

Heehee... Audrea Rose is quite entertaining. She gets angry, but decides to avoid confrontation-- to a point. -chuckles- I loathe people like Salia, don't you? And Rick, too. It makes me wonder, though... why is he so arrogant anyway? And what will happen to change him? (If he does change... Bwahaha! I can't know until later!)

Just want to say; nice portrayal of the setting. It's very... real. Tangible, I suppose. -nod nod- Well, I think that's everything! Cheerio!

-+Espionage In My Shoe

I like all the tension, especially that argument with Salia. What a snob!

Gah, Salia's a **! >:( and Rick is a self-centered bastard! God I just want to punch them both!! I hope Rick gets better later on...

anyways, I love these type of fics! ^_^ They're always so interesting :D

I hope you'll update this soon, I need to see what happens next o_o;; *NEED*

Hmm.. I wonder how you're gonna use the rest of those phrases in your story! I can't wait to see ^_^

wow great start!!update soon please=]

I like this!! update soon!!

This sounds interesting...