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| psychotic aiba lover 2007-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseaww! i liked this. i like it better than the suicide poem. It's nice and really sad. |
| The Breakdancing Ninja 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI see a rejection letter or like, a serious IM saying: "I'm not into you" |
| Aya Elemental Sorceress 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseIt's short but good. I like it, especially the end is very touching. |
| the other demoness 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you wrote the last two lines - the drama it creates. It's like I can actually see your heart all bloody and well, broken. Nice. :) |