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| blackoblivion13 2008-06-14 ch 2,  | abuseOh! That was awesome! Can;t wait for more! |
| Switch 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out!! ^_^ |
| Kailum 2007-03-21 ch 2, | abuseOmg they have to meet up! >:( They'd better next chapter :P I wonder what would happen... Would Jet run away?? x_x please no... I'll be waiting anxiously for your next chapter ^^ |
| Kailum 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAw that was really sad ;_; Poor Jet and Ash :( Why did that stupid Madison have to interfere? I think you're portraying Jet's personality really well... timid and self-deprecating so he'll never approach Ash himself. Maybe as the story goes on, he'll change.. somewhat? Now for your next chapter ^_^ |
| Jey 2007-03-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is lovely, I hope you continue :D |
| Esquirella 2007-03-20 ch 2, | abuse- whones - Stop teasing me! Make them meet up, darn you! |
| Amour Amorita Saphira 2007-03-20 ch 2, | abuseWow... that was something..^^ Someone's playing as fate,huh? hehehehe... I really hope Jet won't notice Ash or he's going to freak out or run from him,ne? Ohh.. goddy goddy^^ More More! I love this...^^ hehehe... Thanks for the hard work! |
| unrequitedx 2007-03-19 ch 2, | abuseI'm in love.. .. with your story. Update when you can! |
| Onion Ring 2007-03-19 ch 2, | abuseI like it, but you tell too much instead of show. it makes the story rather anticlimatic, but i like your use of language and descrriptions |
| Amour Amorita Saphira 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseOKay... MORE!^^ *throwing confeties* =P Love it Love it! So need to know what happens next!! WE... hehehehe... I wanna know what happens next and what's going to happen when they meet each other again. I bet Ash heard it from his parents that they are moving,right? or dash out straight from school?! yeay. More, please! |
| ManIACjAcKaL 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAh! So intruiged! Great start, I really like it so far. |
| Esquirella 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseAwesome start! Did Ash discover Madison's plan before Jet was supposed to leave? Was that him at the airport? |
| fivestar ice 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThis story sounds really good, i espeically like the last paragraph. can't wait for the next chapter |
| Violent Pornography 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseSo far I really like it, the characters are really interesting and jet seems adorable I can't think of any critisims to be honest this chapters seems really promising |
| Queerido 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like its going to be a great story, I can't wait to read more. |