I miss Trick and Seirus. I mean, I love the NEW a Softer Sin, but the old one was cute too. >_

Cute. Very. (hey look, two reviews in the same day-aren't yo special?!) It was funny. Isn't that always the way it goes though? Whatever you did wrong your sory and the other is 'always' right. Ha HA. He almost got away with his excuse too.. Ok well see ya!

Omg. Absolutely perfect. Don't you love relationships? Geez, this is so incredibly funny and realistic. Loved it. Now I'm off to read everything else you've written!! ^^

I like that plot twist at the end. 'Twas funny. :)

Hahahahaha.
Nice save ^_^
Marshmallows. Oh yes, theya re fight worthy, indeed. *nods solemnly*
I hope Seirus does better in future. Although, now with your one shots i don't know what to think of Trick and who he should run away with >_< Ep!

Oh, man, he's going to have some excuses to make.

Really nice, I liked the line about the marshamallows. The only problem I noticed was you said "You forgot to pick up the my marshmallows" No big deal, just a little word problem.

Hahaha! Oh, Sierus. Dear, old Sierus. That is a good idea though. Heaven knows that I'm the most forgetful person I know, but I've never tried to get out of it. Hmm, the plans.

Well, love, I enjoyed this very much! Sierus' head sure is fun to be in! Haha. I hope you upload some more stories :)

Wow, a lot of people could really relate to the narrator's worries, and I'm deffinitely one of them! I can't count how many times I've done that. I really like how you portrayed the narrator in contrast to his lover. Sierus, you can tell, is a very organised and quick thinker. The last few paragraphs were hilarious! I really love this story, well done!