Sound sad to me, becouse I am moveing soon but I have to admit that it is very,cool and unique.

I liked the last line. Well, without the last line, it would've been hard even for me to see much in this poem. I feel that you were a little too repetetive for such a short poem.

Other than that, great job! Keep it up!

The Reverse Edge Blade

I like. Suggestive, and eluding to a further story onto itself. I also like the fact that you have established a narrator's voice within a short work. Well done and thanks for posting.