The rhyming was very good and the concept was oh...for lack of a better word, 'cute'. Nice job.

~Arafax~

Aw that was so sweet and amazing. I'm sure your uncle would of liked that. I loved the style and it was overall amazing.

Wonderful job! The rhyming was perfect!! Awesome, awesome!!

This was wonderful! You rhymed perfectly and the flow was awesome!! :D
I agree, he'll live on forever in out hearts!