This was interesting - different and a surprisingly enjoyable read; I liked the undertone of humor that was sloshed over with drunkness. The rhyme was well done, a little off in some parts, but refreshing to me since I haven't read a poem with rhyme in awhile - reminds me that I kind of miss it. I liked the craziness to it all, random thoughts strung together by some connection or another; it makes me wonder how I would talk if I were drunk since I can be pretty random while sober. Nicely done.