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| recycle rhymes 2007-04-15 ch 1,   | m i like this one...especially my backside is caving, my morlas are leaving. nice work! |
| lackluster 2007-04-02 ch 1, | i can see the inspiration from the song. it's really beautiful, i must say. the imagery especially. wonderful rhythm too, it flows almost magically. |
| Lucid Nonsense 2007-03-20 ch 1, | Beautiful, with great imagery and well-placed rhyme. "The afternoon haze hangs red/cigarette lit sun" Very nice. You'd gone such a long time without updating before, I thought you'd left! |
| elasticbobaturtle 2007-03-18 ch 1, | the rhythm of this is just so entrancing and the flow is gorgeous...just lifts the reader along with the rhyme scheme. Beautiful words, too. |